Changeset 643466a

Timestamp:

Apr 1, 2011, 2:17:59 AM (15 years ago)

Author:

Alex Dehnert <adehnert@…>

Branches:

fysm-4-1

Children:

a58b220

Parents:

3c26efb

git-author:

Alex Dehnert <adehnert@…> (04/01/11 02:17:59)

git-committer:

Alex Dehnert <adehnert@…> (04/01/11 02:17:59)

Message:

Cleanup the front page some.

File:

• asadb/template/fysm/fysm_listing.html (modified) (2 diffs)

asadb/template/fysm/fysm_listing.html

@@ -14 +14 @@
 <p>As you know from your own time here, student activities play an important role in student life at MIT &mdash; they're a
 great place to meet people, practice old skills and learn new ones, have fun,
-and give back to the community.  Undergraduate and graduate students &mdash;
+and give back to the community (and, of course, if you can't find a nice date
+amongst your peers, there are plenty of handsome freshmen boys or cute freshmen girls).
+Undergraduate and graduate students &mdash;
 and alumni like you &mdash; participate in more than 450 recognized
 activities and organizations.</p>
 
-<p>We realize that finding an groups that welcome alums can be hard &mdash;
+<p>We realize that finding groups that welcome cruft can be hard,
 whether you will graduate this spring, or graduated back in the 1960s.</p>
 
@@ -33 +35 @@
 <p>The ASA also organizes an Activities Midway during Orientation with booths
 for more than 200 groups, lots of giveaways, and some performances.  The Midway
-is the afternoon of Friday, September 3 in the Johnson Athletic Center. While most
-attendees will be new freshmen, you're welcome to come back to see our groups.</p>
+is the afternoon of Friday, September 4 in the Johnson Athletic Center. While most
+attendees will be new freshmen, you're welcome to come back to see our groups &mdash;
+and we encourage you to join some.</p>
 
 <p>You can learn more about the ASA and MIT student activities in general on <a
 href="http://web.mit.edu/asa">our website</a>.</p>
 
-<p>We look forward to seeing in our groups for years to come!</p>
+<p>We look forward to seeing you in our groups for years to come!</p>
 
 <p>Sincerely,</p>